RonAmok!

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Sales Letter from Bank of AmericaSaturday morning I sorted through the snail mail pile that had regenerated itself since I performed a similar activity last week. One of the pieces caught my attention — an 8×11 envelope from Bank of America with my name and address handwritten on it. My first impression was that it came from someone who I might have met recently, someone who was following up on a promise to send me something, like an article I might be interested in.

Instead, I found a sales letter with a business card stapled to it.

The business card had a nice shiny picture of Jim Faulkner, Mortgage Loan officer. The copy on the advertisement told me NOTHING…well except for the fact that “More people come directly to Bank of America…,” they are “…dedicated…Close-On-Time…” and have the “…highest service rankings and the lowest foreclosure rates…”

“Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…”

“Nurse, we’re losing him. Caffeine. STAT!”

Normally, after dozing off, I’ll just crumple up the paper and try to hit a three pointer from my seat. But for some reason, I felt generous this time. I thought to myself, “Heck, I’ll need another mortgage some day. Jim looks like a nice guy. Let me checkout his blog to see what he’s all about.”

I searched all over his business card, the sales letter, the envelope and found nothing close. Of course it did contain a URL with a tracking number, but let’s be serious; it exists for Bank of America’s benefit, not mine.

That’s when I started to feel a little bad for Jim. How on earth is he gonna distinguish himself from all the other mortgage sales letters that are crammed into my mailbox on a weekly basis? Without a blog, or a Facebook profile, or any online presence, how will I know what kind of person he is, what sorts of advice he offers, or what unique services he provides that go beyond helping me fill out a mortgage application?

Without offering me this outlet, why on earth would I do business with Jim/Bank of America over the local savings bank, Wells Fargo, or Washington Mutual?

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Just wanted to say hi… I really enjoy your blog. Keep in touch.

Mica
June 30, 2008

Just wanted to say hi… I really enjoy your blog. Keep in touch.

Mica
June 29, 2008

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